Beware: many pauses, laughs, and gulps ahead! ***emailed tho***
Grading:
Criterion A: 5
I gave myself a five because I was able to place the passage in the context of the text and provide adequate supporting details. I believed I struggled to reference the text in terms of summarization.
Criterion B: 7
I gave myself a seven because I believed I thoroughly explained each literary device discussed's purpose for the passage and I attempted to understand the effects on the reader.
Criterion C: 3
I gave myself a three because the structure should have been generally coherent. I understood the structure to be context and then analysis and I hope that it is portrayed that way.
Criterion D: 2
I gave myself a two because of the pauses and laughs and rambling... It was difficult to listen to myself and somewhat hard to follow.
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| This is the planning! |
Even though, you don't include the IOC recording, but I like how you planned on the side of your reading. I feel like it helps organize speaking way better. I hope you do good on your actual one!
ReplyDeleteYou sent me this recording so I have some insight!!! I think your grading was relatively accurate. I think you should try to establish more context (the bigger picture). I really liked your content--I thought you had some really insightful observations and conclusions about the passage! Maybe try to work on your organization, but otherwise this was great! XOXO
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